Thnx to my Buddy n Bro .... Omkar Joshi .... Who inspired me for this write-up thnx a lot Omkar .... I hope u will like it n so the others too ...
Memories to be cherished n
some memories invain...
these 're the one we find..
walking down the Memory Lane !!
Some leave thy heart elated ..
some just joyous pain ..
They will always be wit u ..
whilst thy walk down the memory lane !!
Walking down the isle ...
feels everything like a drawing in a frame ..
I luv this exhibit of memories..
when i walk down the Memory Lane !!
Memories 've colors ... pink n blue..
some flashy and some too lame ..
Can't choose which to see n not ..
as I walk down the Memory lane !!
Should handle them wit Mama's care ..
they are Fragile, made of glassy pane ..
beware not to disturb any of them as
you walk down the Memory Lane !!
All in my day .. all thru my life ..
I never gonna forget to visit this lane ..
Memory Lane ... Memory Lane !!
KD - Aug 16th 2010
6 comments:
this is d feeling 4m bottom of heart.. it ws nice 2 walk dwn d memory lane.
liked 2nd stanza a lot.
real good 1 !!
it's gud but it starts n ends v abruptly....n d flow is missing...i think u shd try 2 rewrite it up cz i've read mch more bttr from u....but nice try !!
Lovely....Its from heart so touching !!!
Hey dude thanks.. but I think this is your own creation.. I might have just been instrumental !! Keep writing
its never too easy, lifting up a pen and..
inking down the memory lane,
sometimes the feelings override the creative brain and ..
thought creeps in as if unjust words would make it in vain
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